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[Save the Last Goodbye for me]

SOLITUDE || Naruto Fanfic

[Deathly Lullaby]





[She's like the Wind]



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AndrellassauruS Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Traditional Artist
i have been seen comissions from your oc for a while so I am now def gonna watch ya :D o/ I am curious about her now :D also grettings from your neighboor country portugal :D 
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BlueMoonroseDragon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2017  Student General Artist
Thanks for the watch dollHug 
SeelenKaetzchen Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for watching ~ by SeelenKaetzchen  
Gyaarados Featured By Owner Edited Nov 16, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Hey, I currently don't have the time to write any in-depth critiques or comments on your fanfics/fanfic chapters which is what I'd usually love to do, but I still wanted to tell you that I've started reading Solitude and so far am really enjoying it.
To be completely honest with you, I *did* have some reservations at first, since I usually don't like Naruto OC stories that interfere with the canon plot of Part I all too much (especially with the chunin exams - having read a bunch of "meh" ones... to say the least) or that change a character's past (Gaara having had a friend during his childhood) but your writing and your OCs as well as your ideas in general managed to win me over. I think your fanfic has so far given me some hope that these stories *can* very well be good, and I am somewhat glad I continued to read despite my initial reservations. My curiosity has been piqued, at least. :D
I especially enjoy your OCs - I really do like them *a lot*, Kazuo already being a favourite of mine, but it's honestly the whole dynamic between the trio (well, plus their lovely teacher... :D) that really does it for me.
Your writing style really hits the mark for me as well, the dialogue is so dynamic and the way you describe & set the atmosphere is very... how to phrase this... "cut to the chase", detailed yet without letting it drag on too long, which is something I appreciate a lot. I hope this made some sense, haha. English is not my first language, so it's hard for me to really express what I want to say sometimes.
I hope I'll get the time to continue reading soon, and I am intrigued as to what else you have planned for your characters! :D
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Diagles Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for the watch ;)
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